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I feel so Blue

Blue as Cinderella's ball gown
Blue as the clothes I'm wearing
Blue as my desktop background
Blue as my ipod's casing
Blue as facebook's theme colour
Blue as the tiles in my bathroom
Blue as my evanescence CD cover
Blue as a smurf cartoon
Blue as the Israeli flag
Blue as the color of Squidward's blood
Blue as an avatar dressed in a rag
Blue as the town that drowned in a flood
Blue as the sleepy twitter whale
Blue as the villain in 'Big Fat Liar'
Blue as the scrubs that doctors wear
Blue as the hottest flame of fire

I feel so Blue
What should I do?

I think I'll mix a little red
So I can feel purple instead!
What color do You feel like?! xD

[this is an old, immature poem haha I just wanted to upload it cause I like the last two lines :P]

>Preview photo is an original collage. You can see it in my gallery here: [link] :)
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:iconshadowofthemoon138:
ShadowoftheMoon138 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this poem so much and I don't care how old it is I don't pay attention to that.
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:icona-w0man:
A-w0man Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2015
Thanks so much <3
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:icongothicphantasmagoria:
I prefer the picture of the purple-haired girl for this poem. What happened to it?
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RainbowDashIsCute Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Student General Artist
i feel tall
i feel almighty
i feel red and purple

:3....
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swapman Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2011
i am glad you reminded the israeli flag :)
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JellyRoll42 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011
cute last line ^ _ ^
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:icona-w0man:
A-w0man Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011
thankyou! :3 ♥
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:iconcarpe-diem-et-noctem:
Currently I'm feeling lavender, because such a nice poem is being accompanied by a stolen picture and I refuse to fave a stolen piece. :(
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:iconchibinights:
ChibiNights Featured By Owner May 11, 2011
I like your eyes. They are so pretty.
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:icondani67:
Dani67 Featured By Owner May 12, 2011
That's not her photo. It's a stolen image, used only to unfairly promote the poetry.
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hentaimaster Featured By Owner May 14, 2011
Its funny that you have ZERO deviations of your own and only 1 friend in the world but here you are attacking somebody who is actually making an effort and uploading things.
Her peotry is actually quite good, sixty plus Groups have featured it and none of them are disrespecting her, she rightfully gives credit to the person she believes to be the owner of the photo.
Unless your planning on adding something amazing and original to your own profile why don't you go Troll Facebook instead :trollface:
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:icondani67:
Dani67 Featured By Owner May 14, 2011
A lot of those groups automatically accept art.

I wasn't saying anything bad about her poetry. In fact, I find it quite good. However, simply giving credit to an image's original owner does not make it okay to use it on here. Not to mention that the person who originally owns the image is no longer a member of dA, and has "false" dA accounts all over.

I'll add something to my profile when I feel like it. I really hate putting my paintings on-line, though. Taking photos of them really doesn't work out so well.
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crescendodaeya Featured By Owner May 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
colorful! love it! love the gloves too!
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Dani67 Featured By Owner May 12, 2011
That's not her photo. It's a stolen image, used only to unfairly promote the poetry.
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lxwasabixl Featured By Owner May 11, 2011  Student Writer
Lol, I like it. I seen the picture and name and write a poem myself that's for the help. (=
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imsorrywilson21 Featured By Owner May 10, 2011
i feel magenta slash perywinkle thought u'd like to know :)
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A-w0man Featured By Owner May 11, 2011
aahh! what pretty colors to feel like! ^_^
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imsorrywilson21 Featured By Owner May 18, 2011
haha :)
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A-w0man Featured By Owner May 11, 2011
aahh! what pretty colors to feel like! ^_^
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:icona-w0man:
A-w0man Featured By Owner May 11, 2011
aahh! what pretty colors to feel like! ^_^
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:icona-w0man:
A-w0man Featured By Owner May 11, 2011
aahh! what pretty colors to feel like! ^_^
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AerixC Featured By Owner May 10, 2011
YEAH PURPLE FOR THE WIN!!!!
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Moderately-Radical Featured By Owner May 9, 2011  Professional General Artist
Love the photo. What a beautiful use of color! Just looking at it makes me smiley. =)
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:icondani67:
Dani67 Featured By Owner May 10, 2011
That's not her photo. It's a stolen image, used only to unfairly promote the poetry. Think about it, how often does poetry get this popular on dA? Hardly ever.
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14shadowkid Featured By Owner May 9, 2011
purple :D
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:iconbliljerk101:
bliljerk101 Featured By Owner May 9, 2011
you look so beautiful (:
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:icondani67:
Dani67 Featured By Owner May 10, 2011
That's not her photo. It's a stolen image, used only to unfairly promote the poetry. Think about it, how often does poetry get this popular on dA? Hardly ever.
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bliljerk101 Featured By Owner May 12, 2011
Well, either way, the girl in that photo is beautiful :)

Lighten up, man. No worries
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:icondani67:
Dani67 Featured By Owner May 12, 2011
Though I do agree with you, I just can't see a point behind getting recognition by using things like that.
I'd love to lighten up about it, but I know too many wonderful poets that get no recognition, if only because they don't use photos without permission.
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bliljerk101 Featured By Owner May 12, 2011
maybe you can point me to these great poets? i admire any art i see, here or there :-)
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:icondani67:
Dani67 Featured By Owner May 12, 2011
Well, there's this girl [link]
Then this guy [link]
Another girl [link]
And another guy [link]
:)
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bliljerk101 Featured By Owner May 13, 2011
Okay, I read one poem from each of them ^^ Their style of poetry is very generic to me, mostly rhymes. The first girl was a bit depressing, but also not in any way that I felt connected to. I am more into abstract metaphors and poems to that nature. Even a really good haiku, I really like these attached to a picture. Something that connects to you cerebrally and kind'a adapts a sensory connection or response. Like for instance, if there was a nice picture of a beautiful lake, the poem could outline the smell in the air, the season, the weather. Then I'm doing more than just seeing a picture at that point, I'm "experiencing" a place, I can visually sense (smell, hear, touch, etc) the picture.

Above all else, I am more into the eye candy. BIG fan of graphic art. ^^ But.. I do like poetry, and I write my own sometimes.
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Dani67 Featured By Owner May 13, 2011
Even so, it is just your opinion and personal preference of poetry types. Those poets don't use other's work to get ahead, which is why I used them as examples. Most of them use complex metaphors and emotions, though maybe not in the one piece you may have read =P (like with the first girl, who I know "irl". trust me, she's far from depressing, haha).

At any rate, I just really couldn't stand the use of someone else's picture to promote poetry (especially when the original owner of the photo does not use dA any more, and the only accounts left are false ones from her)
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koMar-cica Featured By Owner May 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You have perfect hands and nails :D
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:icondani67:
Dani67 Featured By Owner May 10, 2011
That's not her photo. It's a stolen image, used only to unfairly promote the poetry. Think about it, how often does poetry get this popular on dA? Hardly ever.
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koMar-cica Featured By Owner May 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I didn't read the comment under the poem. I liked the picture more than the poem so I commented only the pic.
I think poetry will never get really popular here with all the pictures. Pictures are eye-cathers on sites. It's faster to look at pictures than to read. Maybe there should be a site like dA but only for text entries.
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Dani67 Featured By Owner May 11, 2011
Well, it's still basically a stolen picture. The credit for the picture was also given to someone who stole that picture from a former member of dA.
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koMar-cica Featured By Owner May 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, I know.
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:iconkatpurple:
katpurple Featured By Owner May 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me too!!!!!
I ♥ your hiar n_n
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:icondani67:
Dani67 Featured By Owner May 7, 2011
That's not her hair. That picture isn't even her. It's just a picture she stole to get her poetry more popular. :|
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thegrinchlover Featured By Owner May 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
THISSSSS

Yeah, I only clicked for the picture and when I realized it wasn't hers, I was like "ffffuck no I'm not favoriting this."
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:iconskizzato:
Skizzato Featured By Owner May 7, 2011
I've got violet hair! Your amazing too :P
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:iconhanaakarii34:
Hanaakarii34 Featured By Owner May 7, 2011  Student General Artist
"Blue as the Tardis..."
Is what I'd add in :D (Doctor Who fan)
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:iconintoxicatedkid13:
IntoxicatedKid13 Featured By Owner May 7, 2011
Your hair and eyes! <3
Oh, and of course..clever poem :D
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sebbylvr555 Featured By Owner May 6, 2011
my favourite colour is red...however I'm insane like orange.
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RainingInReverse Featured By Owner May 6, 2011   Photographer
awesomeeee :)
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pandaXweazel Featured By Owner May 6, 2011
She has pretty hands, your poem is cute. haha
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maskqueraide Featured By Owner May 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I really think that if you didn't take the photo and you didn't get permission, it should be taken down....

Maybe take your own photos instead? It can be more personal :]
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glitter-fade Featured By Owner May 6, 2011  Student Writer
Cute pic! My fav color ^-^
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